I loved how when the parents were going back and forth and the narration acted as footnotes almost, highlighting the chasm between professed similarities and actual circumstances
Well, they gave it their best shot. I loved the dance for the check at the end. So predictable. Reminds me of gorillas thumping their chests. Good story, Clancy
I loved how when the parents were going back and forth and the narration acted as footnotes almost, highlighting the chasm between professed similarities and actual circumstances
Thanks Will! there was something a little different about managing this scene, glad I pulled it off
Well, they gave it their best shot. I loved the dance for the check at the end. So predictable. Reminds me of gorillas thumping their chests. Good story, Clancy
I could feel the scraping of failed connection and see the pain in their smiles. Great chapter!