This is such quietly momentous storytelling! I'm dying to see what happens with his mom, but I also suspect I'll have to be patient and let it unfold. Love this line: "He was transfixed by his mother, like he’d just seen an immortal god impaled and bloodied."
Damn! This is such good writing. So perfectly edited. Such smooth transitions throughout between description and dialog. I am envious, Clancy.
Sharron I have no doubt that you could concoct something twice this endeavor. I so appreciate your readership.
Oh, thank God they're still going to be at school together! But - what has that lightning strike done???? .....
Oh, you’ll see what the lightning strike has done…
I've got there and now I see. Blimey.
This is such quietly momentous storytelling! I'm dying to see what happens with his mom, but I also suspect I'll have to be patient and let it unfold. Love this line: "He was transfixed by his mother, like he’d just seen an immortal god impaled and bloodied."